Narratives Cultivated and Wild

© Holly Pettit

May 5, 2006
Castle detail, Holly Pettit
Where is the dividing line between “cultivated narratives,” and those which simply grow up wild and organic from the lives of their creators?

There is still another kind of linking narrative which we haven't discussed yet. It is the inadvertent one, the one which corresponds most closely to prose biography. I know, I know, this sounds like I'm talking about confessional poetry again, and perhaps I have come full circle from my original argument.

Enter David Weigl, who in book after book returns to the jungles of Southeast Asia.

A bouncing betty comes up waist high -

cuts you in half.

One man's legs were laid

alongside him in the Dustoff:

he asked for a chairback, morphine.

He screamed he wanted to give

his eyes away, his kidneys,

his heart... (1)

Weigl does not abandon his readers in Vietnam, though. His many books have given him time (his first was published in 1976) and pages enough to explore different chapters of life - marriage, parenting, spirituality, and recovery.

Note how the voice in this piece based on childhood,

Mr. Brown

was my teacher

of the sums in the sixth grade

and he saw the beautiful

figures in everything. (2)

differs from this, in which a man looks back on the years since childhood:

All morning long in the rain,

I drove through the street of my boyhood

past the falling-down houses,

with my friend from my boyhood

who is a man now, like me. (3)

The nature of how poets write when they're writing their own lives -- and poets are always writing their own lives, even when they costume it in fiction -- leads poets to create unintentional narratives.

In Bruce Weigl's thirteen books he has returned again and again to American soldiers in Vietnam, but also spends lots of time with the Vietnamese people themselves, as well as with American veterans at home. The whole of his work taken together weaves a life story, just as volumes of a private journal or a stack of personal letters would.

Weigl has said in interviews that not everything in his poems happened exactly the way it was written, that imagination has altered the way he has written events. (4) Even so, if it were prose we would call it biography.

So, where is the dividing line between intentional linking narratives - "cultivated narratives," -- and those which simply grow up wild and organic from the lives of their creators?

  1. Weigl, Bruce. Executioner. Small Press Distribution: Berkeley. 1976.
  2. Weigl, Bruce. The Unraveling Strangeness. (Grove Press: New York, 2002) 28.
  3. Weigl, Bruce. The Unraveling Strangeness. (Grove Press: New York, 2002) 37.
  4. Dameshek, Brandon, "An Interview with Bruce Weigl," Memorious: A Forum for New Verse and Poetics, Issue No. 2, July 2004, 3 May 2006. <http://memorious.org/?id=58>.

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